Welcome
I am an editor for both fiction and nonfiction, certified by the University of Washington.
My Approach
From Sleight of Hand to Substance
As a former magician, I learned that any trick can grab attention for a moment. But lasting impact? That requires something more. The same principle applies to writing: you can hook readers with narrative misdirection, or you can create work that holds their attention through genuine emotional and intellectual investment.
The Real Work
I know all the tricks—the narrative equivalent of false bottoms and marked cards. But I also know that readers, like audiences, can spot manipulation from a mile away. They're not looking to be fooled; they're looking to be moved. Together, we'll transform your manuscript into work that commands attention not through clever devices, but through depth that demands engagement.
Morally Complex Fiction
Gone are the days of cardboard heroes and mustache-twirling villains. Modern readers demand—and deserve—stories that reflect the rich complexity of human nature. We'll dive deep into your characters' moral quandaries, creating conflicts that challenge readers to think beyond simple good and evil.
Universal Non-Fiction
Facts change. Data evolves. But the fundamental questions that drive human curiosity? Those endure. Taking inspiration from masters like Loren Eiseley, we'll weave your expertise into explorations of life's deepest mysteries, creating work that remains relevant long after today's headlines fade.
What To Expect
Development Process
First Round: Chapter-Level Analysis
One comprehensive note per chapter that maps the current terrain
Strategic assessment of structure, character arcs, and thematic threads
Big-picture guidance that identifies both strengths and opportunities
Focus on core narrative or argumentative structure
Recommendations for substantial revisions before detailed editing begins
Second Round: Detailed Development
In-depth developmental notes throughout the manuscript
Specific commentary on scene dynamics, emotional payoffs, and thematic resonance
Analysis of character motivations and relationship development
For non-fiction: examination of argument flow and evidence integration
Attention to pacing, tension, and reader engagement
Identification of areas that need deeper exploration or trimming
Optional Third Round: Line Editing
Granular attention to prose and style
Refinement of voice and tone at the sentence level
Consistency in character voices and narrative perspective
Smoothing of transitions between scenes or arguments
Enhancement of imagery and sensory details
Polish of dialogue and exposition balance
Editorial Letter
Available as a standalone service or in combination with any editing round:
Comprehensive manuscript assessment
Detailed analysis of structural elements
Character and conflict evaluation
Theme and premise development
Market positioning considerations
Clear, actionable revision strategy
Working Together
Each round builds upon the previous, creating a structured approach to developing your manuscript. We'll start with broad strokes and progressively refine the work, ensuring that major structural changes are addressed before diving into detailed development.
The process is collaborative and flexible. After each round, you'll have time to digest the feedback and implement changes at your own pace. When you're ready for the next round, your manuscript will receive fresh eyes and a deeper level of analysis.
Communication
I believe in clear, efficient communication that respects everyone's time and energy:
Primary communication is through email
After contract signing, you'll receive access to my business WhatsApp for quick questions
Responses within 24-48 hours during active projects
Monthly check-ins during revision periods between rounds
Brief video calls available when needed for complex discussions
I maintain reasonable boundaries to ensure I can deliver my best work:
While I don't like to set rigid contact limits of hours, I will will ask that you limit communication to the essentials
Emergency contact options provided for true deadline emergencies
Clear response windows that allow for focused editing time
This structure ensures you get both the support you need and the high-quality editing your work deserves.
But It's Hard Work
Pricing
You may request a free 30-minute consultation to discuss your manuscript's needs and determine the best approach for your work.
All projects reuire a 50% depost, with the remaining 50% charged after work has been completed.
Editing rates align with Editorial Freelancers Association guidelines.
First Round: Chapter-Level Analysis
$0.02 per word
One comprehensive note per chapter
Second Round: Detailed Development
$0.04 per word
In-depth notes throughout manuscript
Complete Development Package
Both developmental rounds at $0.05 per word (17% savings)
Flexible timeline between rounds for revisions
Progress check-ins as needed
Line Editing
$0.05 per word
Recommended after developmental editing
Editorial Assessment
Up to 60,000 words: $300
60,000-100,000 words: $500
Over 100,000 words: Custom quote
Can be combined with any editing round for 20% discount
Ready to begin? Email me to discuss your manuscript and determine which combination of services will best serve your work.